Next Wednesday,
For The First Time In My Life
My Vision Will Be
20/20!
This joke was well received on FB but a few hours later I wanted to edit it. Would it be shorter, punchier and funnier as
Next Week,
For The First Time In My Life
I Shall See
20/20!
I didn't change the FB post because it didn't seem right once people had started reacting. Maybe they didn't like the new joke and would want to rescind their "Like" or "Ha-Ha!". It's probably best to just leave the imperfect up there and do better next time.
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